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  1. Sheri
    This is coming along. My concern is that you are developing a design for a raster product, but I dont really get that from the design. IT feels more suitable for illustrator, although I would have to see what you have developed for illustrator. The color look great on screen but be aware of the reproduction of it.
    The overall layout works and is a vast improvement in the past week. A few suggestions:

    Back:
    Throw in a secondary color of type for headlines or subheads as a way to break up important text. throw the system requirements below that last paragraph or align all of them. it looks odd how they misalign at the bottom

    inside:
    spread looks GREAT! But again introduce another color in the type as all the black makes it boring as nothing draws attention

    cover: looks fantastic. is this the best location for the title of the software?

    spines: make sure to include the title and logos on all spines. bring the orange back to the other side (right spine)

    great work and sorry for my delay in responding.
    joe

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